Term 2 Writing Recounting a recent event

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We are learning to:

. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts

. correctly place full stops and capital letters

Success Criteria:

· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives


. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop





Teacher Assessment:


Jordyn you have included a range of interesting adjectives making your recount interesting to read.  You are beginning to use capital letters and full stops in the correct place. Great writing.

Next Step: 

To finish off your writing with more detail for example "I love it because......"

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