We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full stops and capital letters
· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Jordyn you have included a range of interesting adjectives making your recount interesting to read. You are beginning to use capital letters and full stops in the correct place. Great writing.
To finish off your writing with more detail for example "I love it because......"